Characters: 5, it’s a very short story so you can’t expect much character development, but aside from ‘Cordelia loves the sea’, all character impressions are a reflection of other side character’s opinions on them. I don’t think I could describe the two MCs to a friend. I was amused by the chaperone and wish I knew more about her. Atmosphere: 6, aside from being a seaside town, I didn’t get much of a feel for Weymouth and I was often thrown by descriptions of the characters as standing but then doing something you can only do while seated, etc. Writing: […]